SpeedTrance Help

I got this email from someone who is trying to learn speedtrance... I will give him some ideas, but thought you could throw in your two cents also!

This is for Mr Richard Nongard I hope you will read this I seen you do this 100 times and I just cant get it right will you help me get it right Wednesday, December 17, 2008 my name is Exx and I have been working on hypnosis for 11 months and Iam working on the butterfly induction I have tried it on some of my friends and I have failed poorly my buddy Jxxx sat up and laughed at me right in the middle of my induction I will explain how I went about it first I asked him if I coud try and hypnotize him and he said yes so I got a chair for him to set in and then I told Jxxx how it would work and that it was called a gentle butterfly induction that he would set in the chair and I would place my hand on his head and my thumb on his forehead to help lead him in to trance and that he would stear at the tips of my fingers with his eyes and head and on matter where my fingers went his eyes and head would follow and when his eyes and head followed my fingers down I snapped my fingers and said sleep he went all the way down and I said," 54321" with every rock of his body and every tap on his head he would go five times deeper into trance and relaxation and in a minute I would stop rocking his body and tapping his head and when I did he would go 100 times deeper into trance and total relaxation an then I stopped and said with every # as I count from 10 down you will go 5 times deeper into trance 10 9 8 going deeper and deeper 765 thats fine doing great 432 and deeper and deeper in to trance feeling wonderful and with every out breathe would go twice as deep into trance and total relaxation 1 all most there 0 and thats when he sat up and laughed at me. At this point I thought he would be under but he was not, if anyone out there could tell me where I went wrong and help me out I would be forever grateful. This was not the first guy I tried this on he was the forth one and the other 3 were just as bad. If anyone would like to contact me- contact me at (I told him to join hypnothoughts and check the answers here)