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Hi All,
I'm thinking of making a few changes to my website. It's been pretty successful, but I built it a few years ago and the expansion of my practice now means I want to squeeze every last bit of juice out of it. ALL comments, criticisms etc welcome.
I am particularly interested in what improvements I can make to the copy to improve the ratio between visitors / enquirers.
http://www.lastingchange.co.uk
Many thanks in advance,
Adrian
(PS: I also posted this in the main forum; hope that doesn't break some kind of etiquette?)
I'm thinking of making a few changes to my website. It's been pretty successful, but I built it a few years ago and the expansion of my practice now means I want to squeeze every last bit of juice out of it. ALL comments, criticisms etc welcome.
I am particularly interested in what improvements I can make to the copy to improve the ratio between visitors / enquirers.
http://www.lastingchange.co.uk
Many thanks in advance,
Adrian
(PS: I also posted this in the main forum; hope that doesn't break some kind of etiquette?)
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Permalink Reply by Peter Bateman & Lorraine Gleeson on -
Hi Adrian
Just had a look at your website and it seems OK to me it says what you do clearly it's positive not too much info and to me not too little. When I designed my first one (looks amature -ish) I got it checked by a guy who does SEO work, he said there was too much info. I designed a second which looked a lot more professional using different colours it has less info yet the feed back from people seem to prefer the first??????. So maybe a colour change is the only thing I would suggest. Just a thought we tend to get phone calls as opposed to emails after seeing the website, so maybe you are getting the same reaction.
Some feed back
Pete
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Jan
Is that your favorite colour?
>something different! :-)
IJ
Quite possibly... which would mean we're wasting our time talking about. So let's talk about something else now:
I don't apply NLP patterns to my real life. That is why my life remains real.
IJ
That being the case, we are both rowing the same boat.
Yes?
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